Post by yelena on Jul 1, 2009 19:02:46 GMT
Think this needed to be done. OK. After u pick ur answer, pleaze tell wht u think of both poets.
SSX's poems.
Sun Yelena's poems. ((Sorry, mine r a bit long.))
Oh, and Burai wanted this in......... If u pick Neither, it's Burai's.
"Life sucks, then you die.."
SSX's poems.
~Depression's Tole~
My soul begins to fade as blood fills my breath.
It hurts me to say that im on the brink of death.
As I watch the birds sing their beautiful song.
The pain I feel and sorrow I embrace will be gone.
~The Wolf Within~
The wolf within me awaiting the chance to burst out,
When the time is right it will come out with a shout,
Nothing can compare to the power I hold,
Until its chains of bonding break and its form unfolds,
My soul begins to fade as blood fills my breath.
It hurts me to say that im on the brink of death.
As I watch the birds sing their beautiful song.
The pain I feel and sorrow I embrace will be gone.
~The Wolf Within~
The wolf within me awaiting the chance to burst out,
When the time is right it will come out with a shout,
Nothing can compare to the power I hold,
Until its chains of bonding break and its form unfolds,
Sun Yelena's poems. ((Sorry, mine r a bit long.))
Lies
You promised me anything.
You swore your love,
Made everything alright.
And then, you left.
Left me, alone.
In the darkness, unprotected.
Not caring of my fate.
Leaving with a smile.
Three years later, you come back.
Wanting me.
Saying you meant every word.
And you expect me to believe that?
After all you have done.
Saying you were stupid, foolish.
Didn't see what a beauty I was.
But now, your older.
Caressing my face.
Drying my tears.
Kissing my cheek.
Pulling me closer.
My heart explodes.
It can't take the abuse.
I pull away, just to be pulled back.
The word 'sorry' echos in the air.
But as I'm about to give in,
To your love,
To your kisses,
To your touch.....
I'm untouched.
Your kisses aren't the same.
Nothing is.
My heart is free.
And then you hurt me.
Your words, everything.
Just a lie.
Like you.
Everything you said,
Was the truth,
At the time.
But you changed it.
You made it a lie.
A deep wound.
An unsealing cut.
And, you did it all, to me.
`Brittany Rajini
Unseen
Days go by,
Weeks go by,
And nothing changes.
I watch,
I listen,
Yet I don’t speak.
Heart broken,
So many times,
But it’s still the same.
Waiting for you to see,
That I deserve,
To be more than a friend
Hearing what she does,
Seeing the whole scene,
Yet standing by doing naught.
Listening to you talk,
Picking the right words,
Moreover, not even getting a smile.
Yes, this was my choice,
Yes, I took this upon myself,
And use I chose to be me.
But how hard is it,
To put one and one,
Together?
Don’t I deserve more than this?
Shouldn’t I be thanked?
Just a small smile?
But then,
I’m just a shadow,
Never going to be seen.
Playing along the edges,
Feeling your pain,
Yet not ‘there.’
Like a new moon,
I’m always there,
Just unseen.
But shouldn’t I,
Be noticed,
Be a full moon?
There is always,
A price to pay,
This is mine.
Going Unseen,
Being heard,
Knowing everything.
With a broken heart.
-Brittany Rajini
You promised me anything.
You swore your love,
Made everything alright.
And then, you left.
Left me, alone.
In the darkness, unprotected.
Not caring of my fate.
Leaving with a smile.
Three years later, you come back.
Wanting me.
Saying you meant every word.
And you expect me to believe that?
After all you have done.
Saying you were stupid, foolish.
Didn't see what a beauty I was.
But now, your older.
Caressing my face.
Drying my tears.
Kissing my cheek.
Pulling me closer.
My heart explodes.
It can't take the abuse.
I pull away, just to be pulled back.
The word 'sorry' echos in the air.
But as I'm about to give in,
To your love,
To your kisses,
To your touch.....
I'm untouched.
Your kisses aren't the same.
Nothing is.
My heart is free.
And then you hurt me.
Your words, everything.
Just a lie.
Like you.
Everything you said,
Was the truth,
At the time.
But you changed it.
You made it a lie.
A deep wound.
An unsealing cut.
And, you did it all, to me.
`Brittany Rajini
Unseen
Days go by,
Weeks go by,
And nothing changes.
I watch,
I listen,
Yet I don’t speak.
Heart broken,
So many times,
But it’s still the same.
Waiting for you to see,
That I deserve,
To be more than a friend
Hearing what she does,
Seeing the whole scene,
Yet standing by doing naught.
Listening to you talk,
Picking the right words,
Moreover, not even getting a smile.
Yes, this was my choice,
Yes, I took this upon myself,
And use I chose to be me.
But how hard is it,
To put one and one,
Together?
Don’t I deserve more than this?
Shouldn’t I be thanked?
Just a small smile?
But then,
I’m just a shadow,
Never going to be seen.
Playing along the edges,
Feeling your pain,
Yet not ‘there.’
Like a new moon,
I’m always there,
Just unseen.
But shouldn’t I,
Be noticed,
Be a full moon?
There is always,
A price to pay,
This is mine.
Going Unseen,
Being heard,
Knowing everything.
With a broken heart.
-Brittany Rajini
Oh, and Burai wanted this in......... If u pick Neither, it's Burai's.
"Life sucks, then you die.."
