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Love?
Nov 12, 2009 23:56:50 GMT
Post by yelena on Nov 12, 2009 23:56:50 GMT
((can't believe i'm doing this. I've lost it))
They say you can only love once, That you get the chance just once, And you won't get it again. But if that is the case Then what keeps me up at night, Makes me smile when i cry, Makes me roll my eyes when i am sad, Comforts me in spite of the darkness closing in, Lets me doubt being good enough for you, Allows me to fall asleep feeling protected? If this is not love, then what is: the yearning deep inside, being content when things crash down letting everything fall away and not matter, being able to see a point in life? Before you, my corazon was in pieces. Now in seconds i can see it, And know somehow things will work out. Those that think you can only love once, Obviously have never met me.
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Hiei
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Love?
Nov 13, 2009 7:25:26 GMT
Post by Hiei on Nov 13, 2009 7:25:26 GMT
Good poem, love the feeling and emotion behind it.
Needs a better title, though. That's the only thing that doesn't appeal to me. >_>
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Love?
Nov 13, 2009 17:24:52 GMT
Post by yelena on Nov 13, 2009 17:24:52 GMT
I didn't want a title for it. That's why i put "Love?". I think some poems... are better without titles
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