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Post by Tsuki (Ancient One) on Dec 12, 2009 19:22:07 GMT
Final Words
I reach out my hand to you Praying, just praying you’d hold me One last time. No, you look at me as I dwell In the shadows, Watching my blood leave my body As I slowly begin to die. ‘Please’, I say; ‘Just hold me one last time’. You turn away leaving a cold silence, You refuse to turn to save me. I fade in and out But each time you’re not there. I beg of thy, Take pity on this broken soul. I am lost and scared. Techi... please hold me, I weep for you, I’d die for you, I would give up everything to have you. But you’re not there, You were never here.
Shadow Wolf
Calling shadows and casting nightmares, I wander this world alone. Children flee, And Mothers weep, Fathers die all around me. I shed no tears, I merely raise my blade to destroy them. My black armour calls out in desperate hunger, Mortals shall be my feast. For I am that Beast That claims the mountains of Wu. My seed grows And spreads more nightmares. This world shall crumble And the earth shall tremble Beneath the roar that is and always there. These beasts cannot die But they wish they could. Death... sweet Yet bitter. The peace of not needing to breathe, Please allow this gift to behold me. Just let me fade And lay to rest.
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Post by yelena on Dec 12, 2009 20:44:25 GMT
aww. They are gooood
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Lu Xiang
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Post by Lu Xiang on Dec 12, 2009 21:30:49 GMT
Very good infact ;] I love them.
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Post by Tsuki (Ancient One) on Dec 12, 2009 22:25:08 GMT
Thanks guys ^^
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Post by Abane Raizama on May 25, 2010 20:26:47 GMT
Wow, Tsuki-chan! That was great! That was exponentially riveting, for a "poor attempt". You have excellent skill. You should believe in it. Embrace it!
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Post by Lewis on May 26, 2010 19:14:44 GMT
Hm I prefer Final Words, I think it...whats the saying...rolls of the tonuge better They're both great though
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kaihime
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Post by kaihime on Aug 21, 2010 12:22:59 GMT
great job tsuki
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