Josh's Songs

[Xian Ye]

Every so often I have a creative inspiration and I write, so I'll post em here.

"Eternal Sorrow"

I watch you walk away,
Day after day.
It tears me up inside,
When I've lied to you.

I hate the way I feel,
Why can't my dreams be real?
Everyday I say "tomorrow"
Will be the end of my Eternal Sorrow.

I see you standing there,
I cannot help but stare.
I whisper your name,
Knowing you can't hear.

I hate the way I feel,
Why can't my dreams be real?
Everyday I say "tomorrow"
Will be the end of my Eternal Sorrow.

You turn your back on me,
I lose control,
I drift away from you all,
I take a final fall.

I hate the way I feel,
Why can't my dreams be real?
Everyday I say "tomorrow"
Will be the end of my Eternal Sorrow (x2)

[Lewis]

The chorus bit is really nice Its wicked well done

[Xian Ye]

Thanks, I gotta get my other one from my friend, It's not too bad, bit more aggressive I think xD

[link]

Put a melody to it and record yourself singing so that we can all listen to it.

The lyrics are pretty sad and quite emotional (not emo). I honestly would really love to hear a melodied version of it, if possible. I'm serious.

[Xian Ye]

If I could even sing half-way decent, I would get my friend to play the actual music and do so. I'll see what I can do bout getting someone who can sing to record it xD

[link]

Well if you send the song and (if possible) chords, I just might have a fun time at home playing and singing with my guitar. I have a not-so-decent voice though.

[Xian Ye]

I don't have any chords yet, hence why I'd need my friend to actually write chords to go with it, but feel free to copy the lyrics and mess around with it

[link]

Well, if I have the melody, I might figure out the chords eventually, but that'll probably take forever, especially if I want more than simple chords for guitar.

[Lewis]

You so should write a song for DWRPC No idea what the lyrics could be

[link]

DWRPC

Come to DWRPC
Our Admin has a cock
Come to DWRPC
He has a really big cock

jk

[Lewis]

Hmmmmm at least its the truth? XD

[Xian Ye]

I can work on one, no idea for a melody that'd be up to you guys, but I can work on some lyrics over the next day or so.

[Lewis]

Meh you dont have to, suppose it would just be cool

[Xian Ye]

It's not a problem, I just need a bit of time to think bout what would work xD