Trapped (Quest)

[Dai Fu]

Quest: Trapped
Type: normal
Mod: no
Difficulty: Easy
Description: You were on your way to a near by town when the ground under neither you gave way. Your now trapped in a deep hole and no one knows where you are. Use your wits to figure a way out.


Dai Fu was walking calmly to a nearby city, when the ground under his feet collapsed and he fell in a deep hole. After the hard landing, he realized there were no easy exit. I have to get away from here! Lord Sun Jian can be in need! I'll try climbing... He realized the cliff was too steep, he couldn't climb it. He lied in the ground to get a rest while he thought how he would get out of there.

[Dai Fu]

Dai Fu thought for a while and he realized that, if he could dig horizontally, he could make a tunnel and try to reach the village underground. It'd be hard, but he knew his Demon Femur could handle the task.

He started digging to the side he were going before he fell. The air was scarce in some point. He had to make it up right now, or else he wouldn't survive. Although he knew it would be dangerous, he started digging upwards.

[Dai Fu]

Dai Fu started feeling terrible. With soil falling in his head, he could barely see a thing. He couldn't even breathe anymore, he was in an all-or-nothing situation. He started digging faster, but now diagonally, so that less dirt would fall in his head. His skin color was almost lime. It was then that he thought This is... the last... one... I can... do... He caught a boost and move the dirt above him with three consecutive circular slashes, opening way to a groundwater stream. When the water fell in his body, he felt himself purified. The air was beginning to be breathable because of the water flowing through the digged canal.

He realized that he could take a break from all the digging. He slashed the dirt above the groundwater stream in a low degree, so that the space opened would be more horizontal than vertical. He made way to the opened space and lied down.

[Dai Fu]

After a quick rest, Dai Fu moved to his last advance towards groundlevel. He stepped in the groundwater and began moving against its current to see if there was a flow place, so he can work there. It'd be easier for hm to exit.

While walking, he noticed many holes in the tunnel walls. Some were short, some went deep into the earth. He decided to make a detour for the water into one of these tunnels, so he could follow it with breathable air. So he wielded his Femur and started digging. With a curve, he solved the water's problem.

He followed the hole until a three-way divide. One was brighter, another was normal and the last one was in deep darkness. He caught the brighter one, only to get to another divide, now a two-way one. Once again, a brighter one and a darker one. He caught the brighter one, only to get to a place where the two paths met. It looked like something was FORCING him to go through the darker path. And so he did.

Well, coincidence or not, he ended up in the upper lip of the hole he fell down before. Using his Femur to climb, he got to groundlevel, finally. All dirty and extremely tired, he kept moving towards the village...

OC: I don't know if this was correct, but it's my first quest and all... If you need anything, just contact me...

[Zhou Yu]

Very good your writing style keeps the reader interested which is a hard thing to do. Only advice i would give is try to structure it a little more, as it seems to just run on and on little one vast sentance. Thats not inself bad but i see room for imporvement.

Rewards:
300 gold

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[Zhou Yu]

Addition

+10 bravery
+5 dillagence